Two Haiku (sort of)

by Roger J Kenyon

Crimson maple leaf,
cold water drops in fall
cool a fire within.

Stick careesed
by a wave undressed
smoothed by sand.


Posted on 01/05/2009
Copyright © 2024 Roger J Kenyon

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 09/28/10 at 12:28 PM

I enjoy the use of crisp sounding words in the 1st haiku, and then satin-y words in the second one. It really goes with the imagery.

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