my new year's resolution was tossed towards the stars
as i figured i'd have better luck with nature;


you were watching without the telescope
and yet you could see everything
better than me.


i started to become jealous,
but then you said the only amazing view
was of me.



12/31/2008
Author's Note: 


2009 is my year, love

Posted on 01/01/2009
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Nanette Bellman on 01/02/09 at 12:11 AM
way to kick 2008 to the curb jeanna!
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/02/09 at 12:34 AM
Wonderful shot of promise and energy. I really, really liked this.
Posted by George Hoerner on 01/02/09 at 01:55 AM
Hey, take the year and run with it.
Posted by Anita Mac on 01/06/09 at 05:37 AM
Damn right it is.