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6. rooftop pounding (haiku)

by Kathleen Wilson

rooftop pounding winter storm
I paint the trees
dropping petals





the "petals" (little snippets of the watercolor painting) slip down and fall out when you open the card

01/01/2009

Author's Note: #6 of the new year haiku. * I think I like "rooftop pounding" more than "pounding rooftop" (maybe I could leave out the rooftop- but for now I like the sound...)

Posted on 01/01/2009
Copyright © 2024 Kathleen Wilson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maria Massarella on 01/03/09 at 02:29 AM

oh yes!how beautiful, Kath! i love the dropping petals and the colours you have used in creating this, too ... the falling of petals so reminds me of how i do the same with the tiniest sparkling stars falling from cards, folders and anything of mine ... thank you*

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