Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by George Hoerner on 01/01/09 at 12:16 AM Such wonderful words Peter. As someone once 'ah could though I with fate conspire.... Could I but write like this. |
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 01/01/09 at 01:00 AM Thanks for this, Peter. So very well said. I with you health and happiness in the New Year, and if health continues to dog you, twice the happiness then. |
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 01/03/09 at 04:23 AM The second stanza alone makes this a brilliant piece of poesie! |
Posted by Meghan Helmich on 01/05/09 at 07:08 PM i DID read about the earth slowing and the second being added. great use in this poem. it gives it a voice for sure. |
Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 01/05/09 at 11:02 PM Very well done Peter and I agree lets make it better, we can do better. smh |