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a second longer

by Peter Humphreys

this year
they said on the news
that 2008 would be a second longer
I wonder if anyone told the Man in the Moon
or Venus bejewelled beside him
majestic in pitch black eons
of space and time

inside by the turf fire
as we await a new year
that is already old to others
I think of hearthsides past
when those no longer here
were there
it brings not sadness to me
but the fellowship of past joys
and present memory

out in the garden as the sirens blare
in the new year
trepidation runs through me
as my mum used to say
like someone walking over my grave
who knows
but I know
we know
the world can be better

let us make it shine
as Venus
in a bristling December night
of frost
and a January morning
of hope

01/01/2009

Posted on 01/01/2009
Copyright © 2024 Peter Humphreys

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 01/01/09 at 12:16 AM

Such wonderful words Peter. As someone once 'ah could though I with fate conspire.... Could I but write like this.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 01/01/09 at 01:00 AM

Thanks for this, Peter. So very well said. I with you health and happiness in the New Year, and if health continues to dog you, twice the happiness then.

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 01/03/09 at 04:23 AM

The second stanza alone makes this a brilliant piece of poesie!

Posted by Meghan Helmich on 01/05/09 at 07:08 PM

i DID read about the earth slowing and the second being added. great use in this poem. it gives it a voice for sure.

Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 01/05/09 at 11:02 PM

Very well done Peter and I agree lets make it better, we can do better. smh

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