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december thirtieth

by Ava Blu



I knew we were compatible, but I didn’t think we’d fall in love
so I hid my face beneath my scarf and waited to be kissed.


12/30/2008

Posted on 12/30/2008
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/30/08 at 09:55 PM

I hope you don't have to wait long. Very nice.

Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/30/08 at 10:02 PM

this is a short simple love poem right here. says alot with such few words. this also reminds me of the "newness" feeling in a relationship. i love that. i too didn't expect to fall in love with the person i was compatiable with but it happens. bravo.

Posted by Anita Mac on 12/30/08 at 11:58 PM

This of course has the affect of making you both adorable and difficult to kiss.

Posted by Shonda Creemer on 12/31/08 at 02:47 AM

I adore this Jeanna. :)

Posted by George Hoerner on 12/31/08 at 02:42 PM

Were I there, I would pry that scarf away and... Nice write lady.

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