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When Will Love Be Mine?

by Joe Cramer

My mind still goes blank

And I have you to forever thank

Because of your indiscretion

And my supposed misdirection.

I simply do not know what to do

My thoughts still remain few.

I forever await the time

When true love will be mine.

12/30/2008

Posted on 12/30/2008
Copyright © 2025 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/30/08 at 06:53 PM

Looks like the rock and the hard place might be closing in, eh? Anyway, that's the feeling I got from this. Great stuff.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/31/08 at 12:24 AM

Could be the beginning of an old type c&w song, all you need is the guitar, horse, and you're set. I'm not sure which is worse, having it and losing it or not ever having it. A toss-up. TWANG!

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