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december twenty-ninth

by Ava Blu


you will go home with her hair in every crevice of your clothes and you won't shake them off;
she will think of this as she lays down with another man who will shake her body until there is semen in every crevice,
and this man will leave her longing for you but she'll never call you again.

12/29/2008

Posted on 12/29/2008
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/30/08 at 02:13 AM

I'd love to see a short story out of you someday. I have a feeling you'd be quite brilliant at capturing human nature on a slightly larger stage. Nice work.

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 12/30/08 at 05:45 PM

Hugely intense.

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