Battered by Elizabeth Hoadleyall of my
hope and wonder
mixed in a blender
of fulfilled uncertainty
I question the recipe
of an unquestionable destiny
and think of tweakings
to make it
crispier,
flakier,
and more tender
with every bite
Thinking,
pondering,
and wondering,
if all this effort,
all this time
is worth that
savory taste
Baked in the
sun's oven
and caked by
the moon's
glow
I sit
and
wait in shadow...
for the earth
to turn night
into day
and
create a
pastry
worth every bite
to be eaten
by my voracious dreams
12/29/2008 Posted on 12/29/2008 Copyright © 2024 Elizabeth Hoadley
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/29/08 at 04:05 PM Some really powerful introspection here. You do a fantastic job with it. |
Posted by Ken Harnisch on 12/29/08 at 05:56 PM As 'tasty' a metaphorical poem as I've read here in quite some time. Wonderful work! |
Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/29/08 at 06:19 PM ... such wonderful imagery..... |
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