| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/27/08 at 05:53 PM Nice and quite well said. |
| Posted by Nancy Ames on 12/27/08 at 07:43 PM This is a very nicely poetic take on that split-second contact between people - we can all relate to this one. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 01/30/09 at 03:48 AM This one is as haunting as the cry of a wolf crying for the moon. Very good, solid wrenching ending. |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 11/07/10 at 02:22 PM So heart-wrenching. A beautiful piece of writing. |
| Posted by Steve Michaels on 11/08/10 at 12:55 AM Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by Doreen Cavazza on 05/21/11 at 04:40 PM I know this feeling well. Nice job. My only suggestion is about the punctuation. There shouldn't be a period after "meet". A semi-colon or period after "unresponsive" would work. It's short but very sweet - it brings out the emotion of the sentiment very well. |
