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december twentieth

by Ava Blu


i am a blank slate, an empty, white background waiting for you to color my world;

if you can do this, if you can shower me with colors, i know the slate can be whole again.

12/20/2008

Posted on 12/21/2008
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Shonda Creemer on 12/21/08 at 04:16 AM

I have found through experience, that I must color myself ~ because if I leave it up to someone else to do it...they will scribble out of the lines and I am left to clean up the mess. Excellent write. :)

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/22/08 at 05:52 AM

Well, if anyone deserves that kind of treatment, it's you. I like the idea in this of being able to start fresh. It's harder than it sounds, and it often takes more strength than it gets credit for. I think you express that beautifully here.

Posted by Anita Mac on 12/25/08 at 04:54 AM

I love the idea of a blank slate not being quite whole. It fits quite well. And Gabriel's right, if anyone deserves it...

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