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Foreign Soil
by Anita MacI am fidgety
under his spell;
within his Realm of influence,
though not of it. 12/19/2008 Posted on 12/20/2008
Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/20/08 at 04:48 AM Could be worse then? I don't know. There's an ambiguous quality to this piece that I really like. |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 12/21/08 at 03:59 AM this has kept me thinking... i really like it. it kind of feels like a riddle to me. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/23/08 at 07:53 PM Good one Anita....CharMin |
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