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Do It, Move Me
by Melissa PantherMove me, no point to plead,
you were moved
now
move me
my attention span is
a track unsolved and
getting past the drone
is done is long strokes
and shorter seconds
you're just not as
intriguing as you hoped
and if we get into levels
mine trumps yours
inspiration ends with instigation
breathe me in
inhale and so,
have a go at it
move me
arrogance is a deftly acquired
stance in center seductions
where seducing is simple
and maintaining is more distraction
enacted than any other attempt
which is woefully unqualified and
underestimated
so do it, just
move me
you were moved
now
move me.
12/19/2008 Posted on 12/20/2008
Copyright © 2025 Melissa Panther
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/20/08 at 01:22 AM A worthy challenge to throw down. I hope they answer. Great stuff. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 12/20/08 at 06:37 AM A challenge indeed...intriguing as well as beguiling...and one would love to see both mover and moved in such an equation, Melissa |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 07/08/11 at 04:02 AM Oohhh, wow. What a challenge you've presented; hopefully they can live up to it! |
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