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december fourteenth

by Ava Blu


there's some thing in the way you always bring a burden to my shoulders;
it's like that first taste of snow on your tongue when it hits the wrong nerves and causes your head to spin.

12/14/2008

Posted on 12/16/2008
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/16/08 at 04:02 AM

I'm pretty sure we've all met people who did that to this, and that last stanza of yours should make it possible for any one of us to remember what it was like in our own way. Great image.

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