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december fourteenth
by Ava Blu
there's some
thing
in the way
you always
bring
a burden to my shoulders;
it's like that first taste of snow
on your tongue
when it hits the wrong nerves
and causes your head
to spin.
12/14/2008 Posted on 12/16/2008
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/16/08 at 04:02 AM I'm pretty sure we've all met people who did that to this, and that last stanza of yours should make it possible for any one of us to remember what it was like in our own way. Great image. |
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