she hasn't received
the letter in the mail,
but i know it's coming.


she thinks it will be phenomenal;


some epiphany of sorts,


but i know it'll be nothing more than
hello.






12/10/2008
Posted on 12/11/2008
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Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/11/08 at 06:43 PM
you say soo much in soo few words and you say it hard, girl.  very nice.
Posted by Sarah Wolf on 12/11/08 at 07:26 PM
I also appreciated the amount of thought and content contained in just these few words...
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/11/08 at 09:26 PM
Maybe that will be enough for her? I'm guessing not, but I did feel like that possibility could follow up the last line of this. If that makes any sense. I like this a lot.
Posted by Shonda Creemer on 12/11/08 at 10:50 PM
You talked to my ex? LOL 
Posted by Anita Mac on 12/12/08 at 12:58 AM
'Hello' can be all sorts of things though.
Posted by George Hoerner on 12/12/08 at 02:52 PM
The tone of 'hello' says it all. Nice write.