december tenth by Ava Blu
she hasn't received
the letter in the mail,
but i know it's coming.
she thinks it will be phenomenal;
some epiphany of sorts,
but i know it'll be nothing more than
hello.
12/10/2008 Posted on 12/11/2008 Copyright © 2023 Ava Blu
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/11/08 at 06:43 PM you say soo much in soo few words and you say it hard, girl. very nice. |
Posted by Sarah Wolf on 12/11/08 at 07:26 PM I also appreciated the amount of thought and content contained in just these few words... |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/11/08 at 09:26 PM Maybe that will be enough for her? I'm guessing not, but I did feel like that possibility could follow up the last line of this. If that makes any sense. I like this a lot. |
Posted by Shonda Creemer on 12/11/08 at 10:50 PM You talked to my ex? LOL |
Posted by Anita Mac on 12/12/08 at 12:58 AM 'Hello' can be all sorts of things though. |
Posted by George Hoerner on 12/12/08 at 02:52 PM The tone of 'hello' says it all. Nice write. |
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