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december tenth

by Ava Blu

she hasn't received the letter in the mail, but i know it's coming.
she thinks it will be phenomenal;
some epiphany of sorts,
but i know it'll be nothing more than hello.


Posted on 12/11/2008
Copyright © 2023 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/11/08 at 06:43 PM

you say soo much in soo few words and you say it hard, girl. very nice.

Posted by Sarah Wolf on 12/11/08 at 07:26 PM

I also appreciated the amount of thought and content contained in just these few words...

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/11/08 at 09:26 PM

Maybe that will be enough for her? I'm guessing not, but I did feel like that possibility could follow up the last line of this. If that makes any sense. I like this a lot.

Posted by Shonda Creemer on 12/11/08 at 10:50 PM

You talked to my ex? LOL

Posted by Anita Mac on 12/12/08 at 12:58 AM

'Hello' can be all sorts of things though.

Posted by George Hoerner on 12/12/08 at 02:52 PM

The tone of 'hello' says it all. Nice write.

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