Spaces of Space by Anita MacThere are still great distances
between us
(great distances that are still)
to cross
or not
or knot
depending on your disposition.
12/10/2008 Posted on 12/11/2008 Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 12/11/08 at 04:41 PM right now my disposition says knot. awesome! |
Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/11/08 at 04:54 PM anita, i love your play on the not/knots. and yes, some distance is good, but in my opinion, most of it is bad. |
Posted by Laura Doom on 12/11/08 at 05:40 PM Distances - a complex of complexities, and I guess they do cross, which makes crossing somewhat perilous, unless the knot is tied as crossbow with no hitches...poetic licence affords the luxury of placing the onus elsewhere (depending on your disposition). Chasms seem to be market leaders in situations where the hole is greater than the sum of its participants :> Another semantic fest from Amac... |
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