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december ninth
by Ava Blu
you've been battling with the wrong people
on the right side of the road,
and you seem to think this is something i
have control over.
well, honey,
i gave up on trying to figure out
what's under your hood
a long time ago.
12/09/2008 Posted on 12/09/2008
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Shonda Creemer on 12/09/08 at 08:24 PM Man...I LOVE THIS ONE!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 12/09/08 at 09:13 PM So nicely put Jeanna. Better to know early than find out too late. Some things are kept so well hidden. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/10/08 at 06:20 AM It's almost like you're already halfway down the road. There's such a great hard-won strength that seems to come out of this one. That's true for a lot of your pieces, but |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/10/08 at 06:21 AM Gah...sorry.
That's true for a lot of your pieces, but this is one of the ones where it's most obvious. Very sharp, very engaging. I'm holding onto my earlier opinion that this is shaping up to be your best month yet. |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/11/08 at 04:52 PM you are on FIRE this month! |
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