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Eventual

by Johnny Crimson

And in the end it's
someone else attaching hooks to my eyelids
and repelling down my face
sluggishly dragging my head south
somewhere toward obedience
somewhere close to that fuckin' lopsided and gaping excuse for a v .

12/08/2008

Author's Note: ..that you think I enjoy.

Posted on 12/09/2008
Copyright © 2024 Johnny Crimson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/09/08 at 05:09 PM

i think the open endedness of this piece rooney. it's like a mad lib.

Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 12/10/08 at 12:51 AM

Ahaha! Oh the spite in your tone... Have to wonder who what someone else is, if it isn't her. Nice write.

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