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It's the chill, and it's got me shivering.

by Jared Orlando

She drifts in from time to time-
Hiding and wrapped in nature's breath-which
I regard as such a meaningless distraction
Sending me arms-forward to any possibility

I close the window.
Shutting out her welcoming graces,
Your comforting siren song,
The Sharp, Icy breezes
Releasing from around your heart.


12/08/2008

Posted on 12/09/2008
Copyright © 2024 Jared Orlando

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/10/08 at 03:54 PM

Effective use of analogy. Strongly descriptive of a "cold, cold heart".

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