|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/07/08 at 02:56 PM|
Wonderfully vicious. I especially love those first couple of lines.
|Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/07/08 at 03:31 PM|
wow Trisha. i wish i couldn't say "ive been there" but i can. this is so brutual and honest. very nicely done.
|Posted by Aaron Michael on 12/08/08 at 03:36 AM|
4th line. second stanza. wow.
|Posted by Rachelle Howe on 12/11/08 at 02:53 AM|
I'd like to put guitar to this.
|Posted by Rachelle Howe on 06/15/11 at 01:50 PM|
Droooool... Drool. I haven't gotten to slobber on you in a year. It's the ending, sweet pea, and it's so completely you.