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december sixth
by Ava Blu
you can't have my trust
it is swimming around a bowl full of doubts
praying for some redeeming quality
to let me out.
12/06/2008 Posted on 12/07/2008
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Shonda Chrissonberry on 12/07/08 at 03:31 AM Yes on so many levels. Yes. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/07/08 at 03:16 PM Well, I'd venture to say that whoever does get your trust will be damn lucky to have it. It strikes me as something well worth having. I think this might be my favorite of the series thus far. |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/07/08 at 03:33 PM let me know if praying works, will ya? great read btw. |
| Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 12/08/08 at 04:31 AM LOL! Love this...
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