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december sixth

by Ava Blu


you can't have my trust
it is swimming around a bowl full of doubts praying for some redeeming quality to let me out.

12/06/2008

Posted on 12/07/2008
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Shonda Creemer on 12/07/08 at 03:31 AM

Yes on so many levels. Yes.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/07/08 at 03:16 PM

Well, I'd venture to say that whoever does get your trust will be damn lucky to have it. It strikes me as something well worth having. I think this might be my favorite of the series thus far.

Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/07/08 at 03:33 PM

let me know if praying works, will ya? great read btw.

Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 12/08/08 at 04:31 AM

LOL! Love this... MFS

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