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superhuman

by Ava Blu

12/06/2008

Author's Note: 

super powers are for the weak?


Posted on 12/06/2008
Copyright © 2026 Ava Blu


Member Comments on this Poem


Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/07/08 at 05:07 PM
i pretend alot of things.  good job.


Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 12/10/08 at 03:48 AM
super powers are indeed for the weak, because the strongest people on earth...are weak in their love for others.  this is a very pretty and honest write though.  deserves a ton of love for sincerity and a gritty line or two.  muy nice.


Posted by Anita Mac on 12/11/08 at 12:11 AM
Last stanza is perfect.




















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