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superhuman

by Ava Blu



I never invite people over something keeps me as a loner
I told someone I don’t care what others think, and he applauded me for being superhuman

I laughed at the idea of being some superhero having this ability to be different than most
I believed it when I spoke but now,
looking at myself dirty and naked,
I see that truth etched within and my superpowers don’t seem to be hiding it well
so maybe I’m really not a loner
maybe I’m just a human with the awesome ability to pretend.



12/06/2008

Author's Note:

super powers are for the weak?

Posted on 12/06/2008
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/07/08 at 05:07 PM

i pretend alot of things. good job.

Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 12/10/08 at 03:48 AM

super powers are indeed for the weak, because the strongest people on earth...are weak in their love for others. this is a very pretty and honest write though. deserves a ton of love for sincerity and a gritty line or two. muy nice.

Posted by Anita Mac on 12/11/08 at 12:11 AM

Last stanza is perfect.

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