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december third

by Ava Blu

i know you made me listen to that song thinking it would whistle the love out of me,
but the ears have grown deaf and the eyes wish they no longer saw you.


Posted on 12/03/2008
Copyright © 2022 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/03/08 at 09:40 PM

Maybe, it's just the wrong radio station. I really like the image in this. Well done indeed.

Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/03/08 at 09:50 PM

i'm telling you, december is the worst month of the year...

Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 12/03/08 at 11:56 PM

The winter and the many symbolisms. Well written and great imagery. ~JPP

Posted by Anita Mac on 12/04/08 at 04:25 AM

The first two lines are excellent, and then this end of it all being a bit moot. Love your touch, as ever.

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