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Which horse will you ride

by Keith D Allison

To move the world
Apocalypse
Survival, survival
trembling hands
the dark movement
of time
 
Wisdom
Wisdom
Scarce
This
Commodity
 
Can you grasp
the hand
of
humanity
 
will the sun rise  no more
will the heart beat
it's destiny
the eye of the storm

11/30/2008

Posted on 12/01/2008
Copyright © 2024 Keith D Allison

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/01/08 at 04:59 AM

Sounds like you've been to the heart of the thing a couple of times. Very, very cool across the board.

Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 12/01/08 at 06:46 AM

We are in the storm...just have to remember the center of it is calm! Enjoyed this read! MFS

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 12/01/08 at 03:22 PM

...layered and wonderful line breakes, settles the quesion slowly like a cloud becoming heavier and drifting down...

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/02/08 at 03:13 AM

"...destiny in the eye of the storm"....Too true, Keith. Delighted. Thanks.

Posted by Nikki Benson on 12/02/08 at 03:18 AM

wisdom is scarce...

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/20/08 at 02:14 AM

A concise, intense view of the end times. There is the Christ who will hold all in His protection who follow Him.

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