Senses by Anita MacYour eyes draw me
into dark spaces
loud and thick.
I want to know them
by smell.
I want to know you
by taste. 11/30/2008 Posted on 12/01/2008 Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/01/08 at 04:21 AM i like the two senses you choose, very interesting! |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/01/08 at 05:03 AM I really like them as well. It makes it...I don't know...more honest? Either way, this is great. |
Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 12/01/08 at 02:18 PM hot damn! weirdly scary and sexy. i like |
Posted by Anya Kaats on 12/02/08 at 02:19 AM this is so sensual and satisfying! great poem. |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/02/08 at 04:25 AM This poem malkes my imagination go wild. Good poem Anita...CharMin
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