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Senses

by Anita Mac

Your eyes draw me
into dark spaces
loud and thick.

I want to know them
by smell.

I want to know you
by taste.

11/30/2008

Posted on 12/01/2008
Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/01/08 at 04:21 AM

i like the two senses you choose, very interesting!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/01/08 at 05:03 AM

I really like them as well. It makes it...I don't know...more honest? Either way, this is great.

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 12/01/08 at 02:18 PM

hot damn! weirdly scary and sexy. i like

Posted by Anya Kaats on 12/02/08 at 02:19 AM

this is so sensual and satisfying! great poem.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/02/08 at 04:25 AM

This poem malkes my imagination go wild. Good poem Anita...CharMin

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