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18. there is no reality in words
by Nanette Bellman
so this must be make believe.
and these feelings,
they can't be real.
i think you've forgotten all about words.
i think you forgot to think about your words.
because words aren't just made for paper.
we speak them too.
if there is no reality in words,
which is what you say,
then everything you ever speak is lie.
11/28/2008 Author's Note: i didn't say it, someone else did. not too sure i'm happy with this one though, maybe revision.
Posted on 11/29/2008
Copyright © 2024 Nanette Bellman
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/29/08 at 06:29 AM It does feel a little too disjointed, but that might be only because you suggested you might need to revise it. I like what's here, but it does feel oddly incomplete, and I'm not totally sure why. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 11/29/08 at 09:50 PM The only reality is what you make of it. Each of us has their own reality based upon the life experiences we bring to it. The same is true for words. There are many hues in the color blue. |
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