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He Sees You, a poem for Nanette

by David Garner

***go to http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OcE8YWdGtnI cut and paste it and play the song Water from the Same Source by Rachel's, then while the song is playing, come back and read the poem to the song as if it is the soundtrack to this scene*** He is out there, Nanette. I know he is.


Waves crash
More waves crash
Even more waves crash
They crash for a good while

And then

a bird

Then a foghorn

You stand on the shore
He’s in a ship

Crashing himself through the waves
Trying to get through the waves

He sees you, Nanette
He sees you from his ship
He sees your light
He sees your bright bright
Light

Glowing
Like your haloed skin

He tries to get to the ship to go faster
He tries to get his team of soldiers to make the ship go faster

He sees you, Nanette
He sees you from the waves and through the rain
And through the wind

You start to jump
He starts to squint
You wave your arms
He waves back

Oh this man in waiting on the waiting ship

Oh this man is waiting on the waiting ship

And the waiting ship is trying hard to get through
Trying hard to get through to you

More waves



More rain




He hums a Van Morrison song
Thinking of getting close to you

More waves


More rain


More heartbeats


More crashes of waves

Oh this man in waiting on the waiting ship
Oh this man is waiting on the waiting ship
He waits from far away

He wants newness and nearness in the form of you, Nanette

He screams
You scream back
He screams louder
You both laugh
You both cry

Waves between you on shore and on the waiting ship

Waves and rain
And lumps in throat

He sees you, Nanette

Oh this man in waiting on the waiting ship

He sees you

He sees only you, Nanette

He jumps
He kneels to jump higher
Over the edge and into the sea
You gasp
The soldiers run to the side of the ship

He swims through the violent winds and the violent waves

He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you
He swims to you

And then

You both embrace

Dripping wet embrace

From the depth of deepest seas

Salt sea hugs have never felt better
Sea salt hugs have never had a better reason ever ever to be invented

You two in the garden by the shore of the sea
Wet with sea
Wet with rain
Wet with good good good tears

He sees you, Nanette
He sees you

Even through tears

Even through rain

In this embrace
With his eyes closed
He sees you, Nanette

He
Sees
You




















11/26/2008

Author's Note: ***go to http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OcE8YWdGtnI cut and paste itand play the song Water from the Same Source by Rachel's, then while the song is playing, come back and read the poem to the song as if it is the soundtrack to this scene***He is out there, Nanette. I know he is.

Posted on 11/26/2008
Copyright © 2024 David Garner

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Nanette Bellman on 11/27/08 at 03:07 AM

David, wow. I'm truly honored and flattered by this. It brought me to tears. Thank you soo much. Your faith in my personal strife allows me to keep believing and holding on. The music is an incredible highlight to this. I'm really just speechless about it. Thank you soo much again.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/29/08 at 12:50 PM

A celebration of hope that brings positive results! Very emotionally charged!

Posted by Mo Couts on 07/05/11 at 02:51 AM

What a lovely tribute poem to Nanette, David!

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