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internal explosions and other self-indulgent rants

by Dani Rose



you sit and talk casually with your arrogance--
about life, about consciousness, about
everything. you sit and you worship with your assumptions,
over them, over what you can't grasp, over
and through the cracks that line your in-between,
under the light to the places that have yet to be seen--
here where the river runs far and deep, here
where the wounded never sleep.


02/11/2004

Posted on 11/20/2008
Copyright © 2025 Dani Rose

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Nanette Bellman on 11/20/08 at 07:01 PM

i know this man too well. very good.

Posted by Laura Doom on 12/09/08 at 05:54 PM

More than a suspicion of subliminal rhythm, and you characterize personality traits as distinct entities conversing with their host...but then, you write screenplays - what did I expect :>
So, both a sketch and an unpaid frolic. Apologies for the drivelfest - for a minute there I lost myself...

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/19/21 at 09:33 PM

You said quite a lot in an economy of words. Great pick for POTD!

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