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Light-years Away

by Nancy Ames

The line of starlight is curved
and carries news about the past;
a star-reporter saw the light and swerved
around the corner of first and last.

Fire flings sparks among the stars,
while thoughtful women dance around,
loud, laughing men and old guitars
sing something ancient and profound.

I saw smoke above the skyline,
when I looked into your eyes
and there was night behind the sunshine,
cold stars that hated the sunrise.

I suppose that your alien mother,
when she taught you the alien law,
and in spite of a tendency to smother,
always knew how to eat her meat raw.

Light-years away are unknown places;
the truth just can't be seen from here,
but - hey - it's all wide-open spaces
and I'm a foot-loose pioneer.

11/17/2008

Author's Note: Starlight is so old that we don't know what, if anything, is out there at this point in time, so I have used this idea as a metaphor for the dangerous explorations of love.

Posted on 11/18/2008
Copyright © 2026 Nancy Ames

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Olivia Martin on 11/18/08 at 03:06 AM

Nicely done! You have several very nice things working for you here that make this piece quite profound. Keep up the good work!

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