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I-Scream

by Eric Hinkle

Night
The haunting silence of my dead surroundings
casts a menacing panic on the nerves of my brain

Dark
The secret-keeping glimmer of the shimmering spectre
shoots unknowing, all-fearing shivers down
the ripples of my spine

Stillness
The silence is broken by the subtle scratching
of the horrid, wretched beast's claws palpating
the back of my neck

Scream
The world turns from grey to black
as the mystery of my misery is lifted
out of my mind


10/13/06 9:15am-9:30

11/16/2008

Author's Note: um, yeah and stuff.

Posted on 11/17/2008
Copyright © 2024 Eric Hinkle

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/17/08 at 05:58 AM

Very nice attention to form here. It really builds to that great last stanza.

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