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i'm crying

by Blue Medley

I'm crying
I'm crying as i write this poem about you
I'm crying as i write this poem For you
Remembering what was said between us last night
Your old love for him
Your new boyfriend and....
Homecoming... actually you know what fuck homecoming
Anything can happen there i dont want to know
I'm crying because i do want to know
I'm crying at the small chance you gave me... only myabe
For the hole in my heart to be filled with your love again
I'm crying as all my thoughts relate to you
I'm crying as im missing you
You watch me try my hardest to make you love me
You know i'll love you
You know the only tears you will see from me are the ones on this paper
If im ever brave enough to give it to you
I'm crying as i watch you go
I'm crying as i love you
I'm crying as i forget about you I shed a slight smile, As i forget about you.

11/08/2008

Author's Note: love makes even the strongest men cry

Posted on 11/08/2008
Copyright © 2024 Blue Medley

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 11/08/08 at 05:57 PM

I can really hear this being read in front of people. The repetition is what drills the idea in and the imagery gives you the sights of the pain. ~JPP

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