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city of rivers

by H.M Stevens

rise old motor city

like a feather
the wind just wont drop

not a flame or a light
that blinds and burns

because you get too close to its wanting

beyond a steady pulse or engine running

the gas will run out, the pulse is never steady

All your cracked concrete; ashed babies-

the former bounty of your glory

and innovation

The Great Detroit Mind

Your blue eyed dreams


From the notes of your musical
soul arrived

a generation!

an empire

built on the backs of poor

fake golden islands

cruisin' through the neighborhoods

in grave wheeled solitude

langstons dream and kozel's rock

stretching up to touch the sun

10/31/2008

Author's Note: updated 12/26

Posted on 10/31/2008
Copyright © 2024 H.M Stevens

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/01/08 at 12:18 AM

So much to see and experience in and around Detroit. A sad demise to say the least! You've caught the glory and travail and the twilight shadows poignantly and pointedly.

Posted by Scott Cadence on 11/01/08 at 04:25 PM

I enjoyed reading this, vivid imagery.

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