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always borrowing

by Charlie Morgan

no kerosene lamps, instead computers.
we point and the brain clicks; one picture
taken of the world; fuzzy with red-eye;

that's our daily ken; we struggle onward,
sloshing through the picture we took of
a fresh day, only to have used old film.

the store has some new film; you gotta get up,
off your child-like ideas and go effect a real
purchase of new-blood to roll thru your veins.

your blood is your engine's oil; stays best
when fresh, so rejuvenate, rejuvenate! repeat
as needed to calm your nerves, relaxes the day.

developing to be processed while you sleep;
build cities, staircases to the moon; perhaps
castles on the moon; a woodshed would look nice.

10/30/2008

Author's Note: borrowed idea from Henry David Thoreau

Posted on 10/30/2008
Copyright © 2026 Charlie Morgan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 10/30/08 at 05:35 PM

That's a good person to borrow from. I've tried to steal some bloody from my frisky dog but he won't let me put the needle in his veins. Nice write.

Posted by A. Paige White on 10/30/08 at 06:14 PM

This is so good. I enjoyed it all, but am totally captivated by the last stanza. I adore adore adore how you floored me with the last development. Being from the south, the woodshed represents a "whooping", the very LAST place the kid in us wants to go so to have you jolt me from castles and cities and staircases to a whipping at the very end was priceless. I do adore that about your poetry, I never know what height you're going to drop me from, lol, but I always enjoy landing in giggles. I do hope you continue borrowing!

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