pathetic.org :: brooklyn by Dani Rose

brooklyn

i want to kiss you
over and over again,
until your hardened shell
is softened
by the love
that escapes me

10/21/2008

Posted on 10/21/2008
Copyright © 2025 Dani Rose

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/21/08 at 11:36 PM

...uh, uh, yeah, that's it...a short [real] love pome...great write, well said...

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 10/22/08 at 04:38 AM

Good love poem Dani.....CharMin

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/22/08 at 04:49 AM

I wouldn't mind something like that, personally. Nice.

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