|
plastic pieces
by Dani Rose
how enthralling
it might be to
climb into your
ulterior motive--
to caress the smooth
exterior of
your false delight.
how intoxicating--
how invigorating,
it could be
to bask in the glow
of your saccharine sweet
bleached white smile.
10/21/2008
Author's Note: about a girl. that's how most things start, i think.
Posted on 10/21/2008
Copyright © 2025 Dani Rose
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/22/08 at 12:09 AM ...'climb into your ulterior motive'...'exterior delight'...dani, love the use of metaphor bordering on the lovely... |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/22/08 at 05:22 AM That last stanza is just some really wonderful work on your part. The image is perfect. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/27/08 at 02:52 AM It would have to be a pretty BIG ulterior motive for me to fit into it...hehe. Love this. |
|
