| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/19/08 at 09:12 PM On pristine clouds of cotton pink, you leave a trail of delicious sweetness for the mind and heart. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 10/20/08 at 12:21 AM Now, were I that Italian man with hairy chest and arms of steel I would gladly climb inside and live beside that sweet tongue. But being only mortal I will dream with your poem tonight and try to believe I'm in your world. Nicely done lady. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 10/20/08 at 05:00 PM Marvelous! (Does anyone say that any more?) Makes me want to move... I loved this M!!! |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 10/20/08 at 06:12 PM Maria Maria Maria... This flesh exclamation with a *m.a point is utterly divine.. how you lead the imagination into reverberating the savor of the difference. Deliciously thought provoking. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 10/22/08 at 03:36 AM The gentleness of the thought here whispers. It's so soft, that it can almost be heard from one mind to another. Bella...grazie Maria. |
