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20 minutes

by Dani Rose


humidity causes my tears to fall hesitantly
though i'm sure they realize
that salvation indefinitely lies
on the corner of my sleeve.

06/23/1999

Posted on 10/19/2008
Copyright © 2025 Dani Rose

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 10/19/08 at 06:51 PM

Nice write lady. Yes, and 20 minutes can seem a life time as can 20 seconds. The worst humidity I can recall is being near St. Louis MO in June. But that was many years ago.

Posted by Nanette Bellman on 10/20/08 at 11:55 PM

and i thought i was the only who used the sleeve of my shirt as a hospice for tears till the dry? WELCOME!

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 10/22/08 at 12:48 AM

And Mississippi has a lot of humidity. Good poem. Welcome to Pathetic......CharMin

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