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...it wasn't october that made me do it...
by Olivia Weinkeinit wasn't october that made me do it
climbing the walls for days i was
seeking some sort of answer
to questions gone ignored
you just stood there
you never said a thing & when
you finally spoke, it was nothing
nothing
worth listening to & i could have
cried or died, they truly are one
in the same, all this time spent
waiting for this
beautiful confrontation, what i needed
most
and you just stood there, you
just
stood
there
and looked exactly the same.
10/15/2008 Posted on 10/15/2008
Copyright © 2024 Olivia Weinkein
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 10/15/08 at 09:19 PM I like the imagery but in reading it I feel myself reaching for more concretes, more things to round of the idea of the poem...~JPP |
| Posted by Carolyn Coville on 10/27/08 at 04:07 AM heartbreaking! I totally feel the sense of disappointment in the end..."i could have cried or died, they are one in the same" what a great line! |
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