a five foot six pecan by David Garnercrack you open
a five foot six pecan
looking on the inside
nothings on the inside
you're a shell
and there's no meat
nothing there for me to eat
crack you open
a five foot six pecan
10/04/2008 Posted on 10/04/2008 Copyright © 2024 David Garner
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 11/17/08 at 06:08 PM I've found a few empty shells in my day, too. Bigger. I loved this, David! |
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 01/04/09 at 09:36 AM wow... what an analogy. surreal and surprising and really works. I love the fresh nutty emptiness full of insight. |
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