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The perfect fall day

by Keith D Allison

 
Reddish Brown
casts against turquoise skies
fish today
work tomorrow

09/25/2008

Posted on 09/25/2008
Copyright © 2024 Keith D Allison

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/25/08 at 08:54 PM

...georgeous senyru, or some such ru...really a tight lil' story...ala perfect fall day...

Posted by Melissa Panther on 09/25/08 at 09:47 PM

I can feel autumn in every word, perfect!

Posted by Nanette Bellman on 09/25/08 at 10:51 PM

This describes the weather here Keith. It's beautiful. Falls my favorite!

Posted by George Hoerner on 09/26/08 at 02:27 PM

And I haven't tosssed a line for years. They say a bad day fishing is better than the best day at work. Nice write.

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