sweat. by Emily G Myersi wanna sweat you out
my sweet girl sweat
you're a fucking fever
i need to sweat out
light, always
so light your hands
relaxed your eyes
strong, always
so strong your way
you push and pull
give take take take
and i'll let you take
whatever you want
i am flayed open
raw red bloody
purple inside
giving giving
sick, always
so sick my heart
wet my eyes
deep, always
so deep my way
i wanna sweat you out
my sweet girl sweat
you're a fucking fever
i don't want to sweat out 09/24/2008 Posted on 09/24/2008 Copyright © 2025 Emily G Myers
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 09/26/08 at 02:48 AM i know this isn't the comment you're looking for, but the line about being FLAYED takes me back to my aztec history days where the priests used to wear the skins of the humans who were sacrificed at the top of the pyramid. yet still, this poem grabbed me and i was most certainly sucked in and reading with big eyes. i know this feeling. give and take are two such dangerous words in a relationship...always try to avoid those two. |
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