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which weighs more

by Charlie Morgan

my empty stomach growls its discontent;
peristolsis tossing oceanic acid to & fro.

but these poetic, life-draining thoughts,
made of neurons weigh as much as my stomach.

i can carry one; both: too heavy. sleep & food.
let me eat & sleep my cares away. let me smile.

Rip Van Winkle i want to be; supine, asleep.
clouds come and go, i roll from side to side.

soon the world will be where it once started
and i'll grab a seat o' life then; until, then

i'll sleep, dream.
lightly walk by.

09/18/2008

Posted on 09/18/2008
Copyright © 2026 Charlie Morgan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 09/18/08 at 04:28 PM

"my empty stomach growls its discontent; peristolsis tossing oceanic acid to & fro." Excellent, excellent imagery. Very nicely done, sir. As usual.

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 09/18/08 at 04:56 PM

Ohhhh, the choices we poets make! :-) Sweet write, dear Charlie!

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