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09/01/08

by Ava Blu

i asked if you thought
something could be done,

but you just continued to look
towards the mirror

while I began to hum.

09/01/2008

Posted on 09/02/2008
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 09/02/08 at 02:47 PM

Nice wordplay. I especially like the last line.

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