aflame again

by Alisa Js

and if it were you
you and you alone
all along,
the one I knew would be the answer
our solution
to everything we both needed and desired
from this point forward,
would you
venture near?
this time,
knowing it was me?


Posted on 08/29/2008
Copyright © 2024 Alisa Js

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/29/08 at 02:00 PM

...ooohhh, so warm, inviting and yet soooo biting in it's up-frontness...sheeesh, i'm in awe of the guts to ask someone who knows us, if they want another spin..., lovely twist of the romeo juliet thang...i like i like.

Posted by George Hoerner on 08/29/08 at 02:55 PM

Well spoken Alisa. How much peole change over how many years is still an open queston.

Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/29/08 at 04:58 PM

... this is exceptional.....

Posted by Steve Baba on 11/26/08 at 01:39 AM

I enjoyed reading this poem. Excellent work.

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