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aflame again
by Alisa Jsand if it were you
you and you alone
all along,
the one I knew would be the answer
our solution
to everything we both needed and desired
from this point forward,
would you
venture near?
again
this time,
knowing it was me? 08/28/2008 Posted on 08/29/2008
Copyright © 2023 Alisa Js
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/29/08 at 02:00 PM ...ooohhh, so warm, inviting and yet soooo biting in it's up-frontness...sheeesh, i'm in awe of the guts to ask someone who knows us, if they want another spin..., lovely twist of the romeo juliet thang...i like i like. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 08/29/08 at 02:55 PM Well spoken Alisa. How much peole change over how many years is still an open queston. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/29/08 at 04:58 PM ... this is exceptional..... |
| Posted by Steve Baba on 11/26/08 at 01:39 AM I enjoyed reading this poem. Excellent work. |
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