by Alisa Js
and if it were you
you and you alone
the one I knew would be the answer
to everything we both needed and desired
from this point forward,
knowing it was me?
Posted on 08/29/2008
Copyright © 2023 Alisa Js
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/29/08 at 02:00 PM|
...ooohhh, so warm, inviting and yet soooo biting in it's up-frontness...sheeesh, i'm in awe of the guts to ask someone who knows us, if they want another spin..., lovely twist of the romeo juliet thang...i like i like.
|Posted by George Hoerner on 08/29/08 at 02:55 PM|
Well spoken Alisa. How much peole change over how many years is still an open queston.
|Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/29/08 at 04:58 PM|
... this is exceptional.....
|Posted by Steve Baba on 11/26/08 at 01:39 AM|
I enjoyed reading this poem. Excellent work.