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at my funeralization

by Charlie Morgan

i want Rumi, Issa, Buson and Basho
on the front row; my family next.
one by one they'd say a haiku
that was written by each for me.

then i'd be taller than standing,
and snuggly-comfy in their words;
each syllable uttered, a cadence
of assessment of my life lived.

kindness would carry each word;
a silent echo of happiness would
follow each Master's licked lips,
they continue thru 7-5-7 ta-dums

until a drone of syllalbles fill
the air, echoing off trees, clouds,
and all living things 'til they rest
and shed tears will fall no more.

08/26/2008

Posted on 08/26/2008
Copyright © 2024 Charlie Morgan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Sophia Grace on 08/26/08 at 05:57 PM

That sounds like a fabulous sendoff, Charlie. In the final stanza, I see words tangled among branches, thick redwood forests and it is perfect. Great write!

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 08/26/08 at 06:20 PM

I want to live in that forest of words, the first planted and come to fruition by your hand, the last said by those who love you.

Posted by George Hoerner on 08/26/08 at 06:32 PM

Charlie I have no doubt that all the great poets will weep and nash their teeth until you join them in the poets hall of fame!

Posted by Alisa Js on 08/30/08 at 07:17 AM

beautiful

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