by Alisa Js

With you, I could feel amorous
Enamored and more if not careful,
Yet careful is not where I want to be
Not with you,
Impassioned is how you come to me
Ardent and delicious
How we would drive delirious,
Rousing romantic hysteria …
Zealous for fire, wild about flames
You and I, we would never contain
The passion and fire
Ever …


Posted on 08/15/2008
Copyright © 2024 Alisa Js

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/15/08 at 07:27 PM

...oh, alisaJs, you speak of the unspeakable, such a tall concept yet drawn so well on the sketch pad of me heart, if i could 'find' the things you see,...i have to work hard because you have such openness to love, and it's a tricky concept...love!, it hurts, it feels good[not sex, but love]makes us complete to know we are loved and your open pomes allow us to see that, you words of love are so soft, so strong in feeling, you see hope and i devour that, sometimes i feel my glass is half-empty, your glass seems half-ful...

Posted by Steve Baba on 12/07/08 at 08:06 AM

I could really feel this poem. Perfect writing.

Posted by Tim J Bono on 03/15/09 at 07:13 AM

Hey Alisa! Pulled me right in from the first line on this one. Great word choices. Nice glimpse into inner romance. yours, Tim

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