North Shore by Steve Baba Thick frothy waves Bite into the Brown chewy sand, Clear blue water Splashes salty, Flesh and skin Braise under the Orange-red sun. 08/12/2008 Posted on 08/12/2008 Copyright © 2024 Steve Baba Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Alisa Js on 11/23/08 at 05:09 PM I loved it and it does indeed sound like an apt description of the North Shore on Oahu.. alisa Posted by Jody Pratt on 11/29/10 at 09:08 AM Short but very sweet. The imagery here just brings it all together. I much enjoy! Posted by Laurie Blum on 10/30/12 at 12:10 PM I really love this one! You've captured the beauty of the scene so clearly. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)