North Shore by Steve BabaThick frothy waves
Bite into the
Brown chewy sand,
Clear blue water
Splashes salty,
Flesh and skin
Braise under the
Orange-red sun.
08/12/2008 Posted on 08/12/2008 Copyright © 2025 Steve Baba
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Alisa Js on 11/23/08 at 05:09 PM I loved it and it does indeed sound like an apt description of the North Shore on Oahu.. alisa |
Posted by Jody Pratt on 11/29/10 at 09:08 AM Short but very sweet. The imagery here just brings it all together. I much enjoy! |
Posted by Laurie Blum on 10/30/12 at 12:10 PM I really love this one! You've captured the beauty of the scene so clearly. |
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