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orange glaze
by Shonda Chrissonberrythere is a music note
on my check stub
i pay in beats and melodies
pause
i am in motion
your heart is my
orbit
void
my eyelids are heavy
it is you i want
to consume
love
we are one
with trumpets
in our hands 08/05/2008 Author's Note: the prompt was orbit
Posted on 08/05/2008
Copyright © 2025 Shonda Chrissonberry
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/05/08 at 11:40 PM ...shun, this is top drawer, and to think it came from a prompt...youwee! |
| Posted by Shannon McEwen on 09/21/09 at 12:04 AM I like what you did with the prompt, I love the idea that his heart is your orbit, well said! |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 03/16/10 at 10:40 AM this is one of the prettiest poems I've ever read.....EVER. I love it! Congrats on POTD darling soul sister of mine!!!!! |
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