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Thursday, 31
by Melanie J YarbroughHere is the inside of me
laid out on the floor.
Do not tiptoe around them
like they are unseen,
put your heels into it--
the sound is very satisfying. 08/02/2008
Posted on 08/02/2008
Copyright © 2024 Melanie J Yarbrough
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 08/02/08 at 03:12 PM this feels like a seen from a gory movie to me, i can just see someone stepping on spilled guts next to a body, and loving it... that's just what i get... |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 08/02/08 at 05:40 PM Mmmm...I understand what Morgan is saying...I have the same image. But I have more, too. I like this a great deal. |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 08/06/08 at 03:46 PM what a great command at the end. |
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