pathetic.org :: 07-30-08 by Ava Blu

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07-30-08

by Ava Blu



i am starved
for
crystallized metaphors
and un-
broken
analogies,


but i don't think
your tongue
is there yet.




07/30/2008

Posted on 07/31/2008
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/31/08 at 04:47 PM

You do seem to be cursed with being one step ahead of the rest. Another great one.

Posted by Joe Cramer on 07/31/08 at 04:53 PM

this is awesome!

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 08/02/08 at 03:26 AM

I was thinking the same thing as Norm. So much of what you're writing here is excellent!!!

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