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WHSmiths rejection

by Richard Trotter

Upon the grey water I sailed
where silence and dead earth prevailed
as I waited for the lights to seduce me
I let the poison take me out to sea,
Your face like an anchor in the sky
but my boat would not rise that high.

I crashed in a city of dreams
a winter of fossilized screams,
this imagined isle of perfection,
cracked by a wind of correction
like a fool who plants seeds in the snow
and wonders why they do not grow.

07/28/2008

Posted on 07/28/2008
Copyright © 2024 Richard Trotter

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Megan Langley on 09/09/08 at 09:31 PM

I love the last two lines!

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